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Have you seen the soul I sold,
For soles of shoes I've worn and torn?

I think I tossed it in a wholesale bin,
Right next to my free will

Traded it for conformity
And a dollar bill.
:icontheconfusechild:

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WOW!

I have not posted anything in ages. . .

Well, this is the first post of the summer!

=]

Enjoy~

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:iconnotoriousgem42:
i love the repetition of the sounds in the first verse - i had to read it a couple of times to make sure i got it right. very nice work, a common idea made unique through poetry. :giggle:

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"I wonder what Riddick would be like if we gave him a can of Fizzbitch?"
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"Hummus!!! AHHH!!! Hummus!!! AHHH!!!"
:icontheconfusechild:
Hehe, thank you very much.

=]

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"Remnants of the empire-artifacts of love. Will I meet the designer, what will he dream up? Remnants of the empire-gravity awake. . .what's held down to the ground next round, goes into space"

~My Morning Jacket

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